Friday, September 13, 2013

Literature Analysis #1

William Styron: Darkness Visible 






Topic and/or Event

The book that I read was Darkness Visible by: William Styron. This book is a really good read. It talks about his depression and others around him that also suffer from depression. Also this book has quit a wide vocabulary. You may need a dictionary if you want to understand half of the words in it. The book is very descriptive in its way of describing how William Styron suffered through his depression. And how all his close friends had their own forms of depression whether it be losing a loved one or being unhappy and just trying to do what’s best for your child. It is pretty accurate on how depression feels and it gives you a sense of what he is feeling. This is a very descriptive book and I am very happy with how the author portrayed everything. It also mentions a lot about suicide and that it is a way out but you shouldn’t go straight to that answer. Life is your choice though.

                Just for clarity. This book is a description on how the author suffered through depression and how he saw people around him suffering through different types of depression.

                I feel that William Styron wrote this book because he felt that everyone is probably going through the same things I am. But he wrote not only about himself but the people around him.

                So how I came across this book was in the library (ps. Its overdue). I just kind of came across it and when I started reading it I was kind of feeling depressed so when I started reading it I kind of felt a connection and that’s when I felt that it was a pretty good book for this project.

                To me, this book is very realistic. Depression is very big in today’s society and it is actually becoming a problem. He talks about life in the 1960’s and so on. Times really haven’t changed in the way that depression is still big and might be even more of a concern. Depression wasn’t that big of a thing back then either. They used the word melancholia. It actually was said that word was created as far back as the 1300’s. That is quite some time. I have had family members who have also gone through depression. Not quite in the ways that the people in the book did but they have been through the same type of feelings as the people in the book.

People

                So I feel that he chose the people in the book because of the backstory’s they had. Each one had different back stories but still suffered from depression. Some of them were rich and they still suffered from depression. So it goes to show that you can still suffer through depression even if you are rich. Depression can get anyone that it wants. I feel that the author just wanted to let people know that everyone goes through depression. It is just about how you handle it. Whether it be a good way of handling it or a bad way.

                One character was Simone del Duca, a large dark-haired woman of queenly manor. She kind of acts a little high class. It doesn’t really go into character emotions or anything so I can’t get a really good read on her. (Maybe it’s just because it is a bit of a hard read) I would have written them as a direct character. Give a little bit of background and maybe show her giving off some emotions that would give you a real understanding of the type of person she is. Another character that pops up a few times through the story is Romain Gary.  Romain Gary was described as a man in his mid-sixties. And his voice that of an old man. Also very wheezy and possibly had the voice of depression. He acts very shaky. On the fact that his wife had died and that is why he is suffering through the stages of depression. For this character I would probably just leave it as a direct characterization. It captures the description of him pretty accurately.

                Simone del Deca is pretty interesting on the fact that she is rich and actually awarded William with an award of 25,000 dollars. I am kind of positive that she was hitting on William Styron. So that’s why I put her in as one of the characters. Romain Gary was picked because he is mentioned quite a bit and I thought his depression was very sad. He lost his wife. That is a pretty big depression starter. So that’s why I put him as one of the characters. He is very relatable.

Style

                The type of style William used was, I want to say a journalism type of style. It kind of carried on and some of the time I didn’t know what was going on. I had to reread a few times. But it was a good read. I enjoyed the way he descripted the story. It was very realistic. I enjoyed it.

                William Styron did describe a few places. He described Paris, Connecticut, a farmhouse that he owned, a friends vineyard that he visited often, etc… but he didn’t go into very much detail. More of just telling you the location. Not very much landscape description or occurrences that were going on around him.  His main focus for the book was the characters and their depression.

                William Styron mostly used a philosophical point of view. He made you feel like everything doesn’t make sense. Kind of like you get confused in his words and you have to focus even harder to try to get an understanding of what it meant. His tone was really eerie. Pretty creepy and kind of psychotic but this was meant to give you the feel of depression as the disease that it is.

                William Styron had a very eerie attitude towards the audience of his book. In the sense that he just wrote it how it is. How he feels and how his friends feel. Quite honestly I think it was pretty brilliant in how he wrote every thing.

Enduring memory

                Some of the things I will remember is how he describes being depressed and not feeling he is worth anything or deserving of anything. “I believe in the reality of the accidents we subconsciously perpetrate on ourselves, and so how easy it was for this loss to be not loss but a form of repudiation, offshoot of the self-loathing (depression’s premier badge) by which I was persuaded that I could not be worthy of the prize that I was in fact not worthy of any of the recognition that had come my way in the past few years”. It is pretty descriptive in how you could feel so unworthy of an accomplishment.


                The other passage that I found very true was about suicide and philosophical problems. “there is but one truly serious philosophical problem, and that is suicide. Judging whether life is or is not worth living amounts to answering the fundamental question of philosophy”. This is a passage from the book The Myth of Sisyphus. That is a pretty powerful passage. And I am thinking of reading that book next. Thanks for reading.

Thursday, August 22, 2013

This Is Phat!

According to a new report from the United Nations Food and Agricultural Organization, the United States is no longer the world's fattest developed nation- Mexico is. according to other studies the United States is 31.8 percent obese. while Mexico is 32.8 percent obese. while japan holds the least amount of obese people with an amazing 4.5 percent.

diabetes kills an astounding 70,000 people in mexico a year. that was estimate to be around the same number of deaths due to 6 years of gangland war. so obesity is a pretty big problem.

http://news.yahoo.com/blogs/news/america-fattest-obese-un-144341236.html This is the link to this article.


Vocabulary #1

Vocab #1

  • Expository: The presentation of information in clear, precise form.
  • Composition: The act of product of composing literature.
  • Assuage: Make (an unpleasant feeling) less intense.
  • Decadence: A luxurious self-indulgence.
  • Hackneyed: Lacking significance through having been overused.
  • Coalition: A pact or treaty among individuals or groups
  • Transcend: To rise above or go beyond; overpass; exceed.
  • Meritorious: deserving reward or praise - likely to succeed on the merits of this case.
  • Lurid: very vivid, and gruesome to create an unpleasant, harsh, or unnatural affect.
  • petulant: childishly sulky or bad tempered.
That Expository power-point was very informational, and organized.

There has to be a composite author among this list of authors.

While the fight was breaking up, I felt like this assuage feeling was going through my body.

All chocolate commercials always describe there chocolates as being decadent.

The television broke after the hackneyed lifestyle it lived.

The court was still in adjourned because the jury hadn't reached a coalition among each other.

The child that had no promise in the family transcended beyond the expectations of all others.

The worker of the company was meritorious of the hard work he had been doing for the company.

The crime scene had very lurid and descriptive evidence for a murder.

The child had a very petulant reaction to not getting what they want.

My Opinion Is Not (A) Right

Socratic Notes
  • Ask questions about their opinion.
  • In order to validate your point, support it.
  • People like to believe, all they want is a reason.
  • people talk about you, not to your face.
  • Big people make little people's opinions seem small.
  • The right to life.
  • Interdependence: depend on others.
  • No one does it by themselves.
  • Limbic part of out brain and interlectual.
  • People are social mammals.
  • Limbic is emotions.
  • The reptilian part of the brain.

Monday, August 19, 2013

Reflections On Week 1


  1. The only restrictions i would have on the blog would be i dont have a smartphone that i would be able to read other peoples blogs. or see how my mobile app looks or works.
  2. living in poverty and living paycheck to paycheck and always being in debt has changed me as a person. it has made me learn that i don't want this type of life when i get older. i would like to live comfortably not always in debt. i have always lived with my mom and she has always made living somewhere possible even in the tough times i am happy that i get to live with her. This experience has made me think in completely different ways. i now know what the value of a dollar is. that i shouldn't take things for granted and that i really need to pay attention in school and try my best.
  3. somethings I am concerned about in the Expository Writing class would be am i going to be able to do this. Am i going to be able to get through this class with a good grade. I really like this class but those are somethings that i worry about in this class. I feel that If i can get through this class i will have skills and communicating skills that i didn't have in the beginning and i am really excited about that.

5 Go-To Sources For Good NonFiction


  1. Your local library. you should be able to find a good piece of nonfiction there. if you are having trouble then ask the information desk for some good recommendations.
  2. The News Paper. this is a good source cause it is factual and there will always be new things happening in the world.
  3. Google Search For Good Non-fiction. it will pop up books that are being talked about a lot.
  4. Http://www.goodreads.com/shelf/show/non-fiction .is a good source for books that are pretty popular.
  5. Http://www.downersgrovelibrary.org/teens/great_reads/nonfictions.php . is pretty good for teens nonfiction.

A Truly Interesting Piece Of Non-Fiction

So today i was reading the newspaper and i read an article that was saying that the NYPD was adding 2 watchdogs that would watch over the police department and make sure that they aren't corrupt. The concerns about the NYPD were that they were profiling the Blacks, Hispanics, and Muslims of the community and doing random stopand frisking of anybody they thought were doing wrong acts. The New York US District Judge Shira Scheindlin is the one that ruled that the stop and frisk practice was against constitutional rights. There are some cases against the NYCHA (New York City Housing Authority) because they are wrongly accused because of their race or looks. The lawsuits that were charged in 2010 are set to have their trials in october. They were issued a layer. Johanna Steinberg of the NYCHA Legal Defense Fund is the layer for the cases of the NYCHA residents and visitors that were profiled. This is why Shira Scheindlin issued the 2 watchdogs over the NYPD to watch over it and make sure that the profiling that the police officers are doing aren't continued.

I agree with this decision made by Shira Scheindlin because i feel that the police department needs to be watched a little more carefully for the reason of that there might be corruption within the police department that the chief of police may not be aware of. When i say this, i mean all of the police departments. I actually thought we were past the racial profiling that has been taking place in new york. I hope that this isnt happening in a lot more communities. If you are intersted in this story here is a link http://www.mediaite.com/online/judge-scheindlin-the-worst-friend-opponents-of-stop-and-frisk-could-ask-for/ please leave a comment on how you feel about this or what you think about it.